Response to Tutors Comments for Assignment 4

Thank you for your feedback. I have to say that I was very disappointed with your comments.

After deciding that the original set of images did not gel, I went back to my notepad and looked over the previous notes I had made on similar ideas for this Assignment.

On reviewing the set of notes and ideas for Haddington, I then journeyed through the town to each of the locations that I had previously noted, discarding some as although I felt they fitted the brief, they did not make a cohesive grouping. The fact that I was lucky enough to gather over 20 suitable images during that day did not mean that I wandered around with no preconceived plan, the notes that I had made pointed me directly to the locations where I wanted to be. Due to my mobility issues, the actual journey was planned with almost military precision. I have to make sure that when I go out on a shoot, I do not overdo things and cause myself pain. My route is planned and timed so that if I am late then someone knows to come looking for me. As I was on my own for this shoot, I had to limit the equipment to that which I could feasibly carry and in this case, a tripod was too heavy.

For Image 1 I deliberately chose f22 as I was using a 11-16mm lens. Previous experience with the lens had already prepared me for shooting at f22 as I knew the camera speed could go as low as 1/20^th of a second before I would introduce hand held camera shake. I used f22 as I wanted to keep everything in sharp focus including the reflection in the river. Had I used f/8 I would have lost definition and colour in the reflection.

Had there been extra notes in the assignment asking for a cover image I would have adjusted the setup and shot the image with extra space within the frame, however nothing was detailed in the brief regarding a cover image so that was not considered. Before undertaking this assignment, I perused other students’ assignment submissions to ensure I was not copying an idea of misinterpreting the brief. I was not aware of cover images or conclusion images in all the works I saw.

Image 2.  I used my knowledge of the camera and the lens for this image. Because the lens has built in shake reduction I could choose the f stop that I wanted so that I could get all of the subjects in sharp focus. Allowing the lens to assist meant that I did not have to select exposure mode and could instead remain on aperture mode. This enabled me to capture what I wanted rather than allowing the exposure to control the speed.

Image 3 I wanted to capture the quietness of the moment and the fact that the elderly gentlemen was sitting on the bench, keeping himself to himself. He was so engrossed in his reading of the newspaper that he did not interact with passers-by; which included the family going to feed the birds, the cyclist and the dog.

Image 4. I appreciate that this image is relatively common, however I felt it captured the common nature of the activity, which is carried out regularly by many different folk in the area, showing ‘people in action’. The timing of the shot was dictated by the starting time of the game.

Image 5 shows that the river path is no longer used as the main transportation path into the town and has now become a byway used by dog walkers and people undertaking exercise. It has gone from being a part of the town’s business to being part of the town’s leisure.

Image 6. This picture was not specifically planned. Although I had intended to take an unobtrusive, street photography style image (people unawares), I had not known of the charity event taking place, nor that there would be live cartoon characters would be in the town square. As such, I took the image as it arose, spontaneously. I took a couple of images in quick succession and the image chosen, was, in my opinion, the best one. 

DSC_0072. I chose not to include this image in the final six because I felt that conveyed emptiness and a lack of use which is not what I feel is happening in the area. I felt that the peace and quietness of the elderly gentleman in image 3 showed relaxed usage rather than abandonment.

Assignment 4 - A Sense of Place

What: The main brief of this assignment was to draw together ideas and experiences covered in the course so far and produce six images of a location in the style of a thought provoking publication.

Where: The Town of Haddington.

When: Midmorning

How: I undertook research of several locations. After photographing and collating one set of images I decided that they did not gel so I changed location and shot the town of Haddington.

I decided that I wanted to capture images that provoked an emotional response in me. I moved from place to place and waited until I saw something that I felt that I wanted to capture within the context of the assignment.

What I wanted to achieve was to capture the peacefulness of Haddington even though it is an expanding and busy market town. I wanted to show that a lot of the activity takes place in one of two locations - either around the main street at the town’s Corn Exchange or along the river.

The river was one of the first sources of industry in the town. At one time Haddington had a large wood industry and a large mill and waterwheel to grind the grain that was then traded in the Corn Exchange. The town itself is carved into two by the river and is crossed at various points by small bridges.

I think I succeeded well in capturing the town, showing that even though it has lost the mills and the heavier industry, the spirit of the town still survives and people now use the river for entertainment and pleasure.

Just beside the bridge the river runs past The Waterside Bistro. This building was originally a coach house, inn and shops before being renovated and is now a popular bar and restaurant.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 25mm (35mm equivalent 37mm), aperture f22, speed 1/45 second, ISO 400, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

The bright white of the building reflects in all manner of sunlight and produces a lovely reflection in the river nearly all year round. It always makes me happy when I pass to see the reflection in the calm path of the river.

The river provides a relaxing spot for people to pass time either by feeding the swans and ducks or by sitting peacefully by the water’s edge reading a newspaper.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 55mm (35mm equivalent 82mm), aperture f4.5, speed 1/2000 second, ISO 400, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held, 18-70mm lens,

I really wanted to capture the excitement of the children as they fed the birds, each child trying to outdo the others and feeding their favourite bid.

As I moved along the river path I encountered a gentlemen sat for a while reading a newspaper and it reminded me of my dad who used to do the same when on holiday in his caravan.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 300mm (35mm equivalent 450mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/1000 second, ISO 1000, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera lent against tree trunk, 70-300mm lens,

I chose to use the telephoto as I did not want to disturb him as he looked like he just wanted to sit quietly and pass time on his own. At first I thought the hat on the end of the bench was his but realised that it had been left there by someone else, probably found in the path and left there just in case someone came looking for it.

During the historical period known as the 'Rough Wooing' there happened a siege of Haddington and soldiers from the French village of Aubigny came to support the Scottish troops. Due to this link the two locations were twinned in 1965. Since the twinning, Haddington has had a resurgence and interest in sport and the Aubigny Sports centre and grounds, which were built as a result of the twinning are now used regularly by local schools and the public.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 70mm (35mm equivalent 105mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/1500 second, ISO 1000, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

The sports centre sits beside the river and there are always dog walkers, runners and cyclists using the old tow path which runs parallel to the watercourse. Here a cyclist takes their dog out for a run along the river path which runs through the town out to the east and west of the town. The dog looked like it was having the time of its life as it ran long.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 60mm (35mm equivalent 90mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/1500 second, ISO 1000, Shade white balance, Matrix metering, Camera sitting on the table, 18-70mm lens,



I cropped this image down as the dog and the cyclist were too far in the background and were too small; the balance of the image was on the path and the trees rather than on the intended subjects.

Turning back to the town, there was a celebration on for the third “birthday” of a local children’s organisation, and visitors to the corn centre were met with Mickey and Minnie mouse. Many of the children were surprised and excited to see cartoon characters here in the town.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 56mm (35mm equivalent 84mm), aperture f8, speed 1/30 second, ISO 100, Shade white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

I liked the fact that the small child showed no fear initially and was pulling her parent toward Minnie before being distracted by the fountain. One of the other children pulled her mobile phone and photographed Minnie as they approached and then photographed the smaller girls, their parent and Minnie with the backs against the fountain.

I found it quite difficult to reduce my final selection to six images as I found I was having difficulty giving the full sense of place of the town. In the end I had to choose to remove a couple of images that while I found them ideal artistically they did not fit into the brief.

There was a missed opportunity to capture an image of Haddington at its busiest during the school drop off and pickup periods as this is when most people are out and about, as now being a commuter town the town centre itself can be very quiet during the day even at weekends.

I have added the other six images at the end of this assignment.

If I had been taking images for no end result I may have spent more time on the smaller botanical area in town which is full of plants and insects and not so many people. I would also have spent more time within the town limits capturing the passing people. I would have also spent more time photographing in internals and externals of the buildings. The final collection of images would probably not be quite so focused as they are.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 11mm (35mm equivalent 16mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/1500 second, ISO 400, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 11-16mm lens,

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 18mm (35mm equivalent 27mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/1500 second, ISO 1000, Shade white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

I liked the sense of silence and quietness this image gives, but it also gives a sense of abandonment and emptiness that I found jarring.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 18mm (35mm equivalent 27mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/4000 second, ISO 1000, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 44mm (35mm equivalent 66mm), aperture f4.5, speed 1/180 second, ISO 1000, Shade white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 11mm (35mm equivalent 16mm), aperture f11, speed 1/180 second, ISO 400, Shade white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 11-16mm lens,

I really liked the colour of this image as the reflections from the building opposite really brighten up an overcast location. However the lack of people within the image means that the image is not quite suitable.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 56mm (35mm equivalent 84mm), aperture f5.6, speed 1/750 second, ISO 400, Daylight white balance, Matrix metering, Hand Held Camera, 18-70mm lens,

I liked this image as it showed the bridge in use, but I felt that the final six all met the brief better.

Exercise 23 - Selective Processing and Prominence

What: The main brief of this exercise was to take an image from a previous exercise and using processing software adjust the image to make two versions of the image.

Where: Image used was from the Chinese Lantern Exhibition

When: Late evening.

How: I chose the image as I felt that I could adapt it well using processing software to create two versions of the image. One giving promenance to the figures in the settings and the other making the settings stand out.

I really wanted to keep the image as unprocessed as possible, I did not want to go mad with adjusting brightness, contrast, selective colour, colour intensity.

As the images I used were Jpeg only as these are the only type of images produced with the camera I did not want to process them too much as I knew that it could spoil the image quite quickly.

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Bonzart Ampel Tilt Shift Camera, Aperture Mode Auto, focal length 9mm (35mm equivalent 9mm), aperture f2.8, speed 1/30 second, ISO 100, Auto white balance, Multi Mode metering, Tripod mounted camera, 9mm lens,

By adjusting the colour intensity and contrast slightly I have given the image a higher range of colour. I did not want to make the image too bright as I did not want to over expose the lanterns and blow out the colour making them bright blurs. In this case I balanced the colours of the lanterns against the backgrounds and tried to bring out the colour of the jackets of the individuals giving them prominence against the background.

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Bonzart Ampel Tilt Shift Camera, Aperture Mode Auto, focal length 9mm (35mm equivalent 9mm), aperture f2.8, speed 1/30 second, ISO 100, Auto white balance, Multi Mode metering, Tripod mounted camera, 9mm lens,

By adding a slight gradiated filter to the background I have brought down the contrast and brightness of the top of the buildings in the background. This has made the background much darker and suddenly it takes on a greater prominence in the image as it looms over the courtyard and the people below.

I was quite surprised by this exercise as I did not think it was quite as easy to adjust the prominence of the foreground and background in such a way. It made me view the final image quite differently as the background was just that a background to the first image.

Exercise 21 - Making Figures Anonymous

What: The main brief of this exercise was to use certain techniques to photograph a person or persons making them anonymous and less prominent than the area that they are in.

Where: Various Locations

When: Differing times.

How: While out photographing other exercises and other practices I kept an eye out for situations where I could photograph people making them anonymous against the background of the location that they were in.

I chose these photographs for the exercise as I feel that they work very well in making the people within the images completely anonymous and indistinguishable against the foreground of the image. I liked how doing this exercise forced the people into the background and made the balance of the image weigh towards the surrounds rather than the people.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 25mm (35mm equivalent 37mm), aperture f9.5, speed 1/45 second, ISO 3200, Shade white balance, Spot metering, Beanbag mounted camera, 18-70mm lens,

I really like this staircase, the way that the lines are out of balance with the rest of the building gives me a small happy feeling. I just like the out of kilter perspective of the image.

Here the person is walking up the stairs their back is the camera and they are also small against a large space. The fact that you cannot see the persons face means that you have to apply your own experience of the location to them. In this case I believe the person was enjoying the location.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 70mm (35mm equivalent 105mm), aperture f9.5, speed 1/90 second, ISO 3200, Auto white balance, Spot metering, Hand Held camera, 18-70mm lens,

I noticed a number of people walking backwards and forwards over a high gantry way between two parts of the building. Part of the structure had vertical slats on it and as people walked past it gave them a zoetrope style of movement. I waited until one of the people started to walk back and I captured them as they passed between the slats, partially obscuring them from view. I like fact that they are shadow like and by pushing into the partial view that they are phased out of the image and that the attention is given to the location rather than the individual.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 52mm (35mm equivalent 78mm), aperture f27, speed 15 seconds, ISO 100, Auto white balance, Spot metering, Bean bag mounted camera, 18-70mm lens,

I was watching the visitors as they milled around the car at the entrance of the building. The car is one of the formula 1card driven by a childhood hero who I discovered was also very dyslexic. I wanted to take a long exposure showing motion blur as I wanted to capture the different lengths of time that people stopped at the car. Motion blur also makes them anonymous pushing the balance over to what they are looking at rather than the people themselves.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 52mm (27mm equivalent 40mm), aperture f19, speed 2 seconds, ISO 3200, Flash white balance, Spot metering, Hand Held camera, 18-70mm lens, Strobe flash

Here I attempted to combine motion blur with multiple exposure using a fast strobe flash. Unfortunately all that happened was that the fast strobe blurred the image more than I expected, perhaps if the camera had been better supported and the location darker it may have made a difference.

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Nikon D80, Aperture Mode Manual, focal length 50mm (35mm equivalent 78mm), aperture f1.8, speed 1/500 second, ISO 800, Auto white balance, Spot metering, Hand Held camera, 50mm lens,

While photographing the Chinese lanterns exhibition I noticed that I could silhouette people against the lanterns if correctly composed. I tried a number of shots before this obtaining this image. Here the figure is silhouetted against the lanterns and the reflections of the lanterns and has almost disappeared against the light. The person body shape almost mirrors the stance of the figures that she is observing.

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Bonzart Ampel Tilt Shift Camera, Aperture Mode Auto, focal length 9mm (35mm equivalent 9mm), aperture f2.8, speed 1/30 second, ISO 100, Auto white balance, Multi Mode metering, Tripod mounted camera, 9mm lens,

I really wanted to try using a tilt shift lens to see if I could make figures anonymous, here the people are a distance away and although there is a large number of them and they fill quite a large space, by using the tilt shift lens the figures have been made to look small and model like anonymising them by our own concept of perspective which is fooled by the tilt shift lens.

This has been a good exercise as it has allowed me to work with ideas that I have had for a while as well as teaching me the concept of giving anonymity to figures within images through a variety of techniques.